Expository

Expository - Opinion 

Over the past century, sculptures have had dynamic and drastic changes. In the past most of the sculptures used to be figurative or imitation of nature, but artists broke out with looking at different materials and stop making pre-existing objects. The most significant example of these brilliant artists is Tony Cragg, whose artwork is exhibited on the Museum of Contemporary Art these days. As most of modern sculptors, his crafts are abstract which makes you think more about the concept. If you want to know more about modern sculpture, it would be a good idea to visit this exhibition.

Expository Factual Statement

Nowadays technological advancement plays a big role in our lives. It directly impacted our lives in terms of communication, business, and entertainment. One of the most important changes which technology, particularly the internet, brought us is easier communication. We can simply interact with people in remote areas or instantly share information with the help of social media. Businesses have also benefited immensely by their staff performing their tasks at home. E-banking also helps business access financial services in order to sell their goods online. Finally we can consider technology as a means of entertainment which is consist of online games, online libraries and e-books. Besides these breakthroughs technology will continue to benefit humankind.

Farya Mokhtari's Comment :

The topic is that the sculptures have had drastic changes.and I think it’s narrowed enough.

The topic sentence: Over the past century sculptures have had dynamic and drastic changes.

All the sentences are supporting the controlling idea and all of them are relevant.

It’s an expository paragraph and the writer has used appropriate example.