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My grand mom’s room, with its dark brown drapes, is so calm and cozy. There is a mysterious closet at the left corner of her room which is filled with her clothes, some documents, some old photo albums, and her letters. Her bed which is always covered with embroidered bedspread, is on the right side of the room, and her cane leaned on a nightstand, with my grandfather’s picture on it, is closed to it. There is a large window covered by brown drapes opening to flower bed in the yard. Against the wall, across the bed, photos of her beloved children and grand-children are hanged on. There is a mirror on her drawer and next to it is a radio combined with a gramophone on the other side of the room, which is broken, and she keeps it as her husband’s memento. The floor is covered with a beautiful Persian carpet with colorful flowers on it, which my cousin and I used to play with our toys on it. The room is filled with the smell of coffee since she used to drink a sip of coffee every morning because of her migraine. 
 
 
Mahsa is a very beautiful and charming girl and always attracts people’s attention. She has straight brown hair and deep chestnut brown eyes. Like most teenagers she pays a lot of attention to her appearance and likes dressing in the latest and most extravagant fashion.By nature Mahsa is communicative and outgoing, and her biggest dream is to become a singer and I truly believe that one day she’ll make her wish come true. As a normal human being, however, Mahsa also has her shortcomings. She never goes on time to her dates. Sometimes she is absent-minded and inconsiderate and that makes people think she never takes things seriously, however; she has a strong sense of responsibility and you can always rely on her. The thing I admire most about Mahsa is that she is protective and likes to look after people. For me, friendship is the most important thing in the world. I am proud to say that I have such loyal and helpful friend.

Farya Mokhtari's comment:

the paragraph is a description of a person.At first the writer has focused only on the physical features of the person but then the main stress is on the characteristics of that person.
 

Typical past event narrative paragraph

One summer day when I was sixteen, I was introduced to a canoeing campaign, and it was the first time that I had experienced swimming and canoeing in dam. It was a clear sunny day, when we arrive at dam people were standing in line in order to get life jacket and paddles, and when we get ours chatting and laughing we carry the boats, which was called Kayak, to the water’s edge. We went to settle in the boats and after the guardian enlightened us about the route and how to get the last stage, we started a kind of race. It was an appealing experience, while I was watching the reflection of the blue sky in water, and the ripples of water, and at the same trying to conquer the race makes me consider it as life which makes you enjoy and pushes you toward success.

Free writing using Wh words

 

“Wh” Questions

Where is Abyaneh?

What is Abyaneh famous for?

How many people live there?

What is the language spoken there?

 

 

Abyaneh  a spectacular village at Karkas mountain near Kashan,  is famous for its wonderful red soil so that it is also called Red village. The culture of Abyaneh has been preserved with 300 residents speaking Pahlavi language and dressing traditional costumes. With its distinctive architecture, traditional mud brick houses, and unique red hills, it is a destination for tourists all around the world. 

Farya Mokhtari's Comment :

The topic is about Abyaneh

And in my opinion it could have been more narrowed down if we focused only one aspect of itthis paragraph is a decriptive type.